Note: The preview of poetry crashes the lines together, and as a result, the words lose meaning and impact. Please click on the button to see the poems as they are intended to be read. ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………
Expression
Thoughtful, expansive,
Imagining, writing, posting,
Should I tell you what I think?
Doubting, debating, dreading,
Reticent, insecure
Silence
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Happiness
Optimistic, joyful,
Hoping, accepting, connecting
Is this state of mind a choice?
Condemning, loathing, retreating,
Gloomy, shadowy
Depression
I get it. I’ve had the same thoughts about posting. If I say what I think, those who should see those thoughts won’t. Keeping writing real for me means focusing on my writing needs. Good luck and thank you.
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Have you ever tried Canva? It’s free and I always use it when the shape of my poem is important. Just a thought. Writing certainly causes us to experience a plethora of emotions, doesn’t it. Keep writing! — Christie
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The first one-
The word expansive made me appreciate how the shape of the poem did expand and then contract as the doubts entered , leading to silence. And the word debating- how much harm we can do by debating ourselves when we should just be.
The diamanté form really adds to both your poems.
I hope you are well and just exploring depression ❤
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